Video First Draft

I have just finished putting together some of the footage from my first video shoot on adobe premiere, so I have decided to render this first draft of my music video. It is no where near the finished product, as i still need to film the footage with a boy playing guitar and incorporate that in cuts with the footage of Charlotte getting ready for a photo shoot, , It is for this reason that  the transitions in this first draft are not very good and quite jumpy. Also I have not yet used after effects to do any of my editing, but intend to do so when I have the rest of my footage.